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Hitmans Lyrics

Reapers of shadows
Suppliers of lead
Artists of sorts
They paint you red
Do they pray
To the powers that be
Or just lay them to rest
Against their  pleas?
No time for other things
They don’t stop for tea
They “clean” them individually
But add them up, it’s a spree
~ ~ ~
Whether the name is
Killer, Assassin, Hitman, or cleaner
The subject, the victim
Could be a boy, girl, he, her
Where there’s death
They live & dwell
Their  philosophy?
Every soul is for sell
~ ~ ~
They’re the guillotines  
That chop at our necks
Murders their occupation
So they get a check
Are they going to heaven?
They couldn’t care less
This life, their target
Is the only true test
~ ~ ~
Whether the name is
Killer, Assassin, Hitman, or cleaner
The subject, the victim
Could be a boy, girl, he, her
Where there’s death
They live & dwell
Their  philosophy?
Every soul is for sell
©2009 *HitmansHaven
:iconhitmanshaven:

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I was sitting in class and started to think about hitmen. This song was the result. What do you think?

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:iconretr-o-bute:
Well written!

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He who makes a beast out of himself, gets rid of the pain of being a man - Avenged Sevenfold
:iconchristoflehmann:
Well written on the subject. I try to imagine thekind of music you have written to it.
I´d liike to suggest some minor changes in the stresses to make it more userfriendly for a vocalist but nice work.

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M.psych Christof Lehmann

Welcome to my D.A. portfolio: [link]
:iconhitmanshaven:
Thanks! So you're new to deviantArt?
:iconretr-o-bute:
yeah, I just created an account yesterday. However, I have been viewing people's artwork for a few weeks.

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He who makes a beast out of himself, gets rid of the pain of being a man - Avenged Sevenfold
:iconhitmanshaven:
You should join :iconlyrics-community:. Your songs will get more recognition and you can see some inspirational songs, too.
:iconhitmanshaven:
I agree. On some parts it's a little long winded and falls behind on some of the steady guitar grooves I try to make. Thanks for the compliment. What are some of the changes you suggest?
:iconchristoflehmann:
I´d really need to hear the music or read your notes before really making any judgement about how to improve particular parts.
Generally spoken, I would analyse the work as to
a) how the words and syllables fit into structures like " Jumb or Harré "
b) if the peks of the note ( syllable - compared to tact ) is on a vocal or on a consonant
and make sure you have a lot of vocals ( open sounds ) to make it more powerful and more easy to sing. ( sounds much better )

Some other things too but I got to get back to work

Yours
( Nice work )

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M.psych Christof Lehmann

Welcome to my D.A. portfolio: [link]
:iconhitmanshaven:
Hmm...I'd give you the notes to my song, but I sadly can't read or write music. I just play it by ear and on feeling. I couldn't tell you which chords were which, but I can play pretty well. Thanks for your advice. I'll be sure take it to heart.
:iconchristoflehmann:
If you wish you can send me a recording via my e-mail address. Let me know if you want to do that and I can send you a NOTE with my mail address or msn account address.
YYour´s
Christof
NB.: I have a lot to do with my primary occupation ( psychologist ) and with both books and music, but I guarantee you I´ll look at it as soon as I can.

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M.psych Christof Lehmann

Welcome to my D.A. portfolio: [link]

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