Hitmans Lyrics
Reapers of shadows
Suppliers of lead
Artists of sorts
They paint you red
Do they pray
To the powers that be
Or just lay them to rest
Against their pleas?
No time for other things
They dont stop for tea
They clean them individually
But add them up, its a spree
~ ~ ~
Whether the name is
Killer, Assassin, Hitman, or cleaner
The subject, the victim
Could be a boy, girl, he, her
Where theres death
They live & dwell
Their philosophy?
Every soul is for sell
~ ~ ~
Theyre the guillotines
That chop at our necks
Murders their occupation
So they get a check
Are they going to heaven?
They couldnt care less
This life, their target
Is the only true test
~ ~ ~
Whether the name is
Killer, Assassin, Hitman, or cleaner
The subject, the victim
Could be a boy, girl, he, her
Where theres death
They live & dwell
Their philosophy?
Every soul is for sell
















Comments
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He who makes a beast out of himself, gets rid of the pain of being a man - Avenged Sevenfold
I´d liike to suggest some minor changes in the stresses to make it more userfriendly for a vocalist but nice work.
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M.psych Christof Lehmann
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He who makes a beast out of himself, gets rid of the pain of being a man - Avenged Sevenfold
Generally spoken, I would analyse the work as to
a) how the words and syllables fit into structures like " Jumb or Harré "
b) if the peks of the note ( syllable - compared to tact ) is on a vocal or on a consonant
and make sure you have a lot of vocals ( open sounds ) to make it more powerful and more easy to sing. ( sounds much better )
Some other things too but I got to get back to work
Yours
( Nice work )
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M.psych Christof Lehmann
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YYour´s
Christof
NB.: I have a lot to do with my primary occupation ( psychologist ) and with both books and music, but I guarantee you I´ll look at it as soon as I can.
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M.psych Christof Lehmann
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